Saturday, February 11, 2012


we see each other
I offer food, he gives joy
he thinks me the fool

12 comments:

  1. I love squirrels! I feed mine peanuts most of the time, but they prefer peanut butter on 12 grain bread!

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  2. ha ha mine tooo and sourdough

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  3. awesome....they do make me grin:)
    -Jennifer

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    1. oh...so you found my little poems...hee hee
      love condensing thought
      everything a moment

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  5. Your haiku inspires me! Awesome observations painted with words! Suz, you are amazing!

    :)Marilyn

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    1. Once I discovered haiku
      look out...they are everywhere
      Now to hone traditional ones..not so easy
      and shucks...thanks for the compliment

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  6. Okay, I couldn't help but laugh when you wrote, "He thinks me the fool." :)

    You write some great Haiku. I've written some too, but haven't posted much of it on my blog. I think you're inspiring me to do this.

    So glad I found ya! :)

    -Mara

    http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com

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    1. well hello, fellow haiku lover....it's really in the moments that we find them...
      I have been working on non traditional ones...because that seems to be the kind that others appreciate
      the traditional are much harder and sometimes ellusive to the reader on first and many reads...but when the moment opens up to you or at least me...wow
      I shall check out your blog....thanks

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    2. Suz,

      I actually posted a Haiku poem today. Check it out and let me know what you think.

      Also, I tend to "go with the flow" in regards to Haiku as well. I just write what I feel, without being too traditional or over technical.

      -Mara

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